Haloween poem prolouge

I wrote this poem for a friend, promising her I would put it in a book that I would illustrate for her.
I have not even shown this to her, let alone put it in a book or drawn pictures for it. I know it isn't perfect, so I will be taking it to my English teacher to help with some of the editing. Most of the editing I need to do is just grammar, but in some cases, as I will point out, the problems are with rhythm, and such. So to clear up some things, here are some of the things I need to work on:

• In stanza 3 where it says: "(too lame, the same)" I didn't know which one to use, so far the majority of the vote goes to "the same" but we'll see.
• In stanza 8 I switched from rhyming "Back" and "shack" to rhyming "creak" and "freak" which kind of offsets the whole pattern of the poem, where I kept all the words that were rhyming consistent throughout each stanza.
• Lastly, in stanza 10, the last few lines of the poem seem to be going at a different rhythem the the rest of the stanza, but maybe it's just me

Anyways, enjoy the poem, and If you have any feedback let me know. thanks!
ps sorry if there are some "n"s missing, the "n" key on my keypad is messed up so sometimes they don't show up. If you notice that that happened, then please let me know so i can fix it, thanks!